so i said

to her i said

Is this it? Does the story end there?
“No, I am thinking it has the makings of a novel.”

ok, but you already blew your wad

“What do you mean?” she asked.

they had sex on the first meeting
i don’t even know who they are

or why they are attracted to each other

or why i should be attracted to either one

ya gotta build character. depth
create tension. vulnerability

allow wonder